Jenys is very descriptive and dicribed why she liked or didnt like the activety
I think she needs to slow down her speech a bit!lol
squish [The Jelly Bean Chav!]
This is good. I like your descriptions and also the speed you spoke at (it made it easy to hear what you were saying). To improve it make your accent more spainsh.
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Quite clear.
Very good.
Posted by: Samantha | March 07, 2009 at 06:07 PM
she did good pronounciation
she had good words
she could of used tambien less
Posted by: gabi | March 07, 2009 at 07:15 PM
Jenys is very descriptive and dicribed why she liked or didnt like the activety
I think she needs to slow down her speech a bit!lol
squish [The Jelly Bean Chav!]
Posted by: sqish | March 08, 2009 at 01:21 PM
This is good. I like your descriptions and also the speed you spoke at (it made it easy to hear what you were saying). To improve it make your accent more spainsh.
Posted by: Ellie | March 08, 2009 at 05:31 PM
it was really good description and you connected the senteces well!
to improve you can slow down a bit!
Posted by: izzy | March 08, 2009 at 07:16 PM