All words were pronounced nicely and You were talking quite fast so it was very hard to keep up and i only just maniged to understand what you said.
Very very good.
[huhhumm
he doesnt like going out with his mum, it was easy to understand as he talked slow.
to improve i think he needs to sound more spanishy
eg: gimnasia he said Jim... not Himnasia,if you know what i mean?!?!
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it was a good acsent and description but it was slightly to fast
Posted by: scott | March 07, 2009 at 03:18 PM
i like the way you tried to use a spanish accent i also like the description i think you could improve on pronouncing words
Posted by: ben | March 07, 2009 at 05:27 PM
All words were pronounced nicely and You were talking quite fast so it was very hard to keep up and i only just maniged to understand what you said.
Very very good.
Posted by: Samantha | March 07, 2009 at 06:02 PM
[huhhumm he doesnt like going out with his mum, it was easy to understand as he talked slow.
to improve i think he needs to sound more spanishy
eg: gimnasia he said Jim... not Himnasia,if you know what i mean?!?!
squish
Posted by: sqish | March 08, 2009 at 01:29 PM
it was really clear and slow enough to understand!!!
BUT...
he could of sounded more spanishy???
Tammii x
Posted by: Tammii | March 08, 2009 at 06:11 PM