it flowed really well and it was like you were talking to someone it just flowd so good
the only thing i could think of was that that you just said a ew words slightly wrong and stumbled but hardly noticible
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its really good good description and good acsent you need to not use the same word twice
Posted by: scott | March 07, 2009 at 03:14 PM
It was very good and it did seem like Bens voice belonged to the hotdog.It was very clear.
Ihave nothing bad to say about it.
Posted by: Samantha | March 07, 2009 at 05:40 PM
It Was really good and sound like he pronounced it properlay.
He also did groovy words.
he could but a bit more info
Posted by: gabi | March 07, 2009 at 06:56 PM
i thought it was good and intresting! i thought it was descrobed well but ben ould work on his accent a bit more
Posted by: georgie | March 08, 2009 at 05:27 PM
ben could improve on his accent
the gd things were=
he had a good desctiption
Posted by: Tammii | March 08, 2009 at 05:40 PM
i think that it was really good and clear, he can wrk on his accent more and he used some good words.
Posted by: Jenny | March 08, 2009 at 05:55 PM
it flowed really well and it was like you were talking to someone it just flowd so good
the only thing i could think of was that that you just said a ew words slightly wrong and stumbled but hardly noticible
Posted by: Elliot | March 08, 2009 at 07:11 PM