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January 22, 2009



Good connectives and grammar but could put in more things about the town.


I like it because you said all of the shops and why you like them or not.
There are some missed out words-I think!


missed out grammer/words
more things about bideford
dont use lists and reapeted ands
good description of shops
good conectives


its really detailed but to improve it you could say if the town is clean or something


It's awesome how you said you liked the shops or if you didn't and you said why you liked them.
You could have said that your town is cleaner than Barnstaple or something like that!?

james howitt

good description
but doesen't descibe where it is

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