En mi pueblo estar tres supermercado y dos panaderías y un carnicerías y una frutería. Me gusta una frutería porque bonito, no me gusta tres supermercado aurrido. Esta un joyería , me encanta un joyería porque bastante . Esta una Liberia, me gusta una Liberia porque calma y también hay florería, no me gusta porque alergias polínicas. Esta un tienda de reglas.
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Good connectives and grammar but could put in more things about the town.
Posted by: ally | January 22, 2009 at 03:50 PM
I like it because you said all of the shops and why you like them or not.
There are some missed out words-I think!
Posted by: meg | January 22, 2009 at 08:21 PM
missed out grammer/words
more things about bideford
dont use lists and reapeted ands
good description of shops
good conectives
Posted by: toby | January 24, 2009 at 01:00 PM
its really detailed but to improve it you could say if the town is clean or something
Posted by: katie | January 25, 2009 at 04:18 PM
It's awesome how you said you liked the shops or if you didn't and you said why you liked them.
You could have said that your town is cleaner than Barnstaple or something like that!?
Posted by: Jaye | January 26, 2009 at 08:18 PM
good description
but doesen't descibe where it is
Posted by: james howitt | January 28, 2009 at 04:15 PM