tengo doce anos.Mi compleanos es el veintiocho de noviembre.soy contenta, divertida y deportiva.
Tengo una hermana ,que se llama Molly, es fastidiosa .Tengo una madre ,que se llama Heather, ,es fastidiosa y carinosa.Tengo uno padre, que se llama Tim, es perezoso, muy contento y muy divertido,tein 43 anos. Mi abuelo, que se llama John, y es contento.Mi abuela, que se llama Audrey, es carinosa.Mi tia, que se llama Fiona, es chismosa,tein 49 anos.Mi tio, que se llama Andy, es chismoso ,fastidiosoy muy,muy,muy mides.
This is Kate
Posted by: Ellie | January 15, 2009 at 04:13 PM
Squish
Posted by: Gabi | January 15, 2009 at 04:33 PM
kate
Posted by: georgie | January 15, 2009 at 05:44 PM
Kate
Posted by: Shamil | January 15, 2009 at 07:27 PM
Kate
Posted by: Jenny | January 16, 2009 at 06:36 PM
i think this is squish
Posted by: bethany | January 17, 2009 at 08:15 AM
I think Squish ( Kate )
Posted by: Samantha | January 17, 2009 at 11:48 AM
kate
Posted by: scott | January 17, 2009 at 02:53 PM
kate
Posted by: izzy | January 18, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Kate
Posted by: Tasmin | January 18, 2009 at 03:17 PM
kate
Posted by: ben | January 18, 2009 at 06:43 PM
this is kates family
Posted by: Annabel | January 20, 2009 at 05:18 PM
lotts of description and you wrot a lot and improve spelling
Posted by: scott | January 21, 2009 at 04:01 PM
I think Kate described her family really well and gave good description of what they are like. The only thing you could do to improve it is say when your closer family (mum, dad and sister)'s birthdays are.
Posted by: Ellie | January 21, 2009 at 05:18 PM
yay its ME
lalalalala LA
Posted by: sqish | January 21, 2009 at 06:24 PM
Ithink this is really good and theres nothing wrong with it!
Posted by: Jenny | January 21, 2009 at 08:36 PM
very good bunch of wordss and nothing negitive and easy to understand.
Posted by: Samantha | January 22, 2009 at 04:02 PM
good discription and next time try and add more detail for each person
Posted by: bethany | January 22, 2009 at 06:27 PM
it was good and had quite alot of detail and stuff and she decribed there personality and stuff, to improve she could say if she gets along with molly or not
Posted by: georgie | January 22, 2009 at 06:36 PM
Kate
Posted by: Abby | January 22, 2009 at 07:11 PM
to improve squish could have used different verbs! i think she used alot of description and detail
Posted by: izzy | January 22, 2009 at 08:58 PM