tengo doce anos. Tengo hermano su nombre es Jack, el es dieciocho y muy molesto. Es tiene un peircing de lengua, el los ojos son marrones y es el pelo es negro. Tengo hermana ella nombre es Karla, ella es veintitrés, ella es carinosa, ella los ojos marrones y ella pelo es marrones. Tengo hermana ella nombre es Olivia, ella es trienta y dos, comprensión, ella los ojos marrones y ella pelo negro. Tengo hermana ella nombre es Claire, ella es trienta y cuatro, ella es útil, y ella los ojos marrones y es pelo negro. Tengo mi madre ella nombre es Carol, ella es cincuenta y cuatro, ella chismosa, y ella los ojos marrones y es ella pelo negro. Tengo mi padre el es sesenta, el leal, y el los ojos verde y es el pelo rubio.
Georgie
Posted by: Shamil | January 15, 2009 at 03:32 PM
This is Georgie
Posted by: Ellie | January 15, 2009 at 04:14 PM
Georgie
Posted by: Gabi | January 15, 2009 at 04:34 PM
GG [georgie]
Posted by: sqish | January 15, 2009 at 05:58 PM
Georgie
Posted by: Jenny | January 16, 2009 at 06:38 PM
i think this is georgies
Posted by: bethany | January 17, 2009 at 08:21 AM
I think Georgie
Posted by: Samantha | January 17, 2009 at 11:49 AM
georgie
Posted by: scott | January 17, 2009 at 02:48 PM
georgie
Posted by: izzy | January 18, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Georgie
Posted by: Tasmin | January 18, 2009 at 03:19 PM
georgie
Posted by: ben | January 18, 2009 at 06:44 PM
this is about georgies family
Posted by: Annabel | January 20, 2009 at 05:19 PM
lotts of descripion and a lot of writing and try not to use a translator
Posted by: scott | January 21, 2009 at 04:07 PM
i think georgie explained her family really well i think it was really good when she explained about jack having a piercing georgie also said that her sister was really caring i think georgie used a translater so she could improve on that next time
well done georgie!
Posted by: Annabel | January 21, 2009 at 04:29 PM
I think this Is georgie
Posted by: ELLIOT | January 21, 2009 at 05:33 PM
good detail and described the family well she can improve on describing there personalities
Posted by: ben | January 21, 2009 at 06:45 PM
1)Really good desciption of the family members.
2)Good long description
Too much use of "TENGO" in the start of the sentense.
Posted by: Shamil | January 21, 2009 at 07:25 PM
I think this is Georgie
Posted by: Abby | January 22, 2009 at 06:57 PM
Georgie has done realy well with her descripton on her family, but se could describe her self more
Posted by: Abby | January 22, 2009 at 07:07 PM