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January 15, 2009



B.Jn [beth]




Ithink Bethany


good descripion you describe your family well but i think you need to write more




this ones guurrrd, she described her family well,her verbs were good but i dont know what they mean!
If B.J used a translator,DONT!


If this beth her conective words came just at the right place but some spellings are difficult to understand


I think it is very good. But it could use a bit more descriptions.


some of the words are hard to read like remdy ( not knowing what that means. ) the good things about it is a very good mix of words and trying not to sound like a teacher but it was very good well done.


Beth has done realy well with her desriptio of her faily but she coudl of made it longer


Beth used good description and i think she used all the verbs correctly! and maybe to improve it she could of used a little more connecting words

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