Tengo once, y mi cumpleanos es el dos Junio. Soy estoy contento.
Tengo una familia bastante grande mi marde Elaine, Tengo trienta y tres, y tu cumpleanos es el dos de Octubre. soy estoy contento. Y mi parde Paul tengo trienta y tres, y tu compleanos es el dos de junio. Mi hermana, Yasmin, tengo nurve y mi cumpleanas es el mayo.
Soy estoy confindida.
Adios!
sam
Posted by: georgie | January 15, 2009 at 05:45 PM
samfa [sam]
Posted by: sqish | January 15, 2009 at 05:55 PM
Sam
Posted by: Ellie | January 16, 2009 at 05:28 PM
Samantha.
Posted by: Jenny | January 16, 2009 at 06:43 PM
Me
Posted by: Samantha | January 17, 2009 at 11:47 AM
samantha
Posted by: izzy | January 18, 2009 at 11:05 AM
samantha
Posted by: izzy | January 18, 2009 at 11:19 AM
samantha
Posted by: izzy | January 18, 2009 at 12:05 PM
samantha
Posted by: ben | January 18, 2009 at 06:42 PM
this is sams family
Posted by: Annabel | January 20, 2009 at 05:17 PM
sam
Posted by: scott | January 21, 2009 at 03:51 PM
well done sam i think sam explained her family quite well and she explained there ages , i liked it when sam explained when there birthdays where i think sam could of inproved it by saying what they like doing as a hobby or work.
Posted by: Annabel | January 21, 2009 at 04:22 PM
Sam
Posted by: ELLIOT | January 21, 2009 at 05:42 PM
If it's Sam then she did really well with the
Joining together words and I liked the way she said
Bye at the end
Posted by: ELLIOT | January 21, 2009 at 05:45 PM
She could check some spellings
Posted by: ELLIOT | January 21, 2009 at 05:47 PM
this one is good,she describes her family well.Sam has even put their B'days, although she has put :tengo nurve y mi cumpleanas es el mayo.wich means :my sister has 9,and by birthday is blah blah..
get my drift?
Posted by: sqish | January 21, 2009 at 05:57 PM
I think it has lots of description. But she spelt confused wrong!
Posted by: Jenny | January 21, 2009 at 08:34 PM
She could have done a bit more stuff like chismosa adj.
Posted by: gabi | January 22, 2009 at 05:03 PM
samantha has used good detail and th words flow but dont start a sentence with AND
Posted by: bethany | January 22, 2009 at 06:21 PM