Philippa describe su pueblo

vivo en Bideford.En mi pueblo habla un hospital,un mercado,un museo,un casillo, un aparcamientoun centro comercial llamado Morrisons un centro comercial llamado Atlantic village, un correos, una iglesia, una comisari, una biblioteca y una oficina de turismo.Si yo fuera alcaldeme gustaria tener una estacion

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[Lauren x]

. you gave a nice rang of things that are in your town.
. also you gave us more than just a few you told us queit a few shops and things that are there
.1 thing you could improve on is say what these shops are like and compare your town to another.

[Mollie]

2 Gooods would be there is alot of stuff where you live but there isn't much about other stuff ???

[Faye Haywood]

Philippa write speak a hospital instead of writng there is hospital.
The descriptions were very good also the mayor description was good too.
Faye Haywood

[meg]

Youve said the names of places and lots of the shops and services.
You could have given your opinions on Bideford.

[EWEN :)]

you have described and writen lots of things. but you could of put if you like it or not ^^