Mollie describe su pueblo

Hola vivo en torrington. En mi área hay una biblioteca y luego hay un parque de childerens.
Usé a vivido en henleigh y me moví baje desde allí cuando yo tenía dos años.
En henleigh es realmente grande comparado a torrington.

Comments

[ally]

Descriptive and interesting but could use more adjectives.

[meg]

It is good because you have said what is in Torrington and you compared where you used to live with Torrington.
To improve it you could have said whether you like Torrington or not and why.

[katie]

its really good and descripive

to improve it you could say whats good or bad i torrington like if its messy and stuff

[EWEN :)]

its good work
to make better say wat is in it like clean or something

[james howitt]

good describtion of where it is
but could be longer
good gramer

[Jamie]

its a good description,

you coulg say if it smells or somthind