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January 22, 2009



Descriptive and interesting but could use more adjectives.


It is good because you have said what is in Torrington and you compared where you used to live with Torrington.
To improve it you could have said whether you like Torrington or not and why.


its really good and descripive

to improve it you could say whats good or bad i torrington like if its messy and stuff


its good work
to make better say wat is in it like clean or something

james howitt

good describtion of where it is
but could be longer
good gramer


its a good description,

you coulg say if it smells or somthind

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