Hola, Vivo en Ilfracombe. En ilfracombe hay un museo no me gusta un museo porque es aburrido!Tambien hay el correos y mucho inglesia y una cormisaia. Tambien hay muchos paisaje y un bosque! En ilfracombe hay tambiene una floreria y una joyeria tambien hay un suprmarcado. Ilfracombe mas divertido que woolacombe porque hay un cine y mucho parque! Sin embargo woolacombe hay la grande playa. Ilfracombe mas turistico que barnstaple porque hay mucho la mar y bonito paisaje! Yo siempre vivo en Ilfracombe! Yo la he vivido durante 13 anos. Si yo fuera alcalde ,me gustaria tener tenga un grande centro comercial con un grande aparcamiento porque me gusta las compras y nosotros necesitan un aparcamiento! Adios!
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i think she described her town very well
Posted by: philippeeeeeeeeee | January 20, 2009 at 06:34 PM
very nice discription you gave alot of detail. also you said about your town being modern and pretty which was good. You coul compare your town to another though. x
Posted by: Lauren x | January 21, 2009 at 07:39 PM
2 good reasons would be lots of detail and a improvement you can't do cause its really good !!!!
Posted by: Mollie | January 21, 2009 at 07:44 PM
Lauren wrote
none the less Woolacombe there is a big beach.
The whole thing is very good the Ilfracombe description is also very good.
Faye
Posted by: Faye Haywood | January 21, 2009 at 09:43 PM
Loads of info and opinions.
You could say how you would improve Ilfracombe.
Posted by: meg | January 22, 2009 at 08:35 PM
its really detailed and info but the sentences are a bit mixed up
Posted by: katie | January 25, 2009 at 04:22 PM
lote of info and good work you can say what you would like it to be and how to imporve
Posted by: EWEN :) | January 27, 2009 at 05:46 PM
good long description
needs accents
Posted by: james howitt | January 28, 2009 at 04:23 PM
its a good description
you could say if its morern
Posted by: Jamie | January 30, 2009 at 08:18 PM