it was good because you were serious and you did it well you could inprove by not haveing a big problem in the middle and then making it all go away but well done
Very good speaking and lots of interesting problems. You could however maybe choose other types of food. tuttut Mr fuller bad camera man skills (the finger) hehe.
The act is really good because its clear your voices are loud, it makes sense and there is good pronounciation, You need to impove on not very much but some times you did face your backs to the camera. But it was very very good, well better than mine.
from charlotte
When leaving a comment, be safe- NEVER use your surname.
These comments are designed to help people learn- so make 2 positive comments, saying what they've done well, and then suggest 1 way the work might be improved!
it was good because you were serious and you did it well you could inprove by not haveing a big problem in the middle and then making it all go away but well done
Posted by: molly | December 01, 2008 at 07:09 PM
Very good speaking and lots of interesting problems. You could however maybe choose other types of food. tuttut Mr fuller bad camera man skills (the finger) hehe.
Posted by: Tegan | December 01, 2008 at 08:44 PM
They used a proper menu...
They had money...
They left their drinks...
Posted by: Allan | December 02, 2008 at 03:26 PM
Good use of language.
More Clear.
Good storyline.
Posted by: Jake | December 02, 2008 at 07:08 PM
The act is really good because its clear your voices are loud, it makes sense and there is good pronounciation, You need to impove on not very much but some times you did face your backs to the camera. But it was very very good, well better than mine.
from charlotte
Posted by: charlotte | December 02, 2008 at 07:31 PM
Very clear, and lots of vocab,
but I think your pronunciation could be improved.
Great work!
x
Posted by: Jessica | December 03, 2008 at 07:14 PM