The act was really because it was funny clear and it was good because you had english clips enbetween. to impove maybe try to have not so many pauses
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that was really great i love the spanish accent jess n i like the use of facial expressions but not too keane on the american accent !!!
Posted by: livi | December 01, 2008 at 08:45 PM
that was really great i love the spanish accent jess n i like the use of facial expressions but not too keane on the american accent !!!
Posted by: livi | December 01, 2008 at 08:46 PM
Alot of interesting information and problems (like the spoon) you could talk about alot of foods.
Posted by: Tegan | December 01, 2008 at 08:52 PM
Stupidly funny accents...
Funny problemas...
Could have orderd more exciting things...
Posted by: Allan | December 02, 2008 at 03:32 PM
Good use of language.
More Clear.
Good storyline.
Posted by: Jake | December 02, 2008 at 07:13 PM
The act was really because it was funny clear and it was good because you had english clips enbetween. to impove maybe try to have not so many pauses
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Posted by: charlotte | December 02, 2008 at 07:50 PM
guys that was good lol
jess the facial expressions are fab lol
jake and elen the storyline was good
fab!
Posted by: lauren | December 07, 2008 at 09:11 PM