the acting at the end was good and you did well to stop yourselfs from laughing it was perfectly good there was nothing wrong with it (but all the laughing)
the acting at the end was good and you did well to stop yourselfs from laughing it was perfectly good there was nothing wrong with it (but all the laughing)
Of cause it was really good because eden tegen and me are in itbut we do need to impoveon not laughing. The pronunciation was good at the begining and you could tell what tegen and eden were eatting.
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the acting at the end was good and you did well to stop yourselfs from laughing it was perfectly good there was nothing wrong with it (but all the laughing)
Posted by: molly | December 01, 2008 at 07:01 PM
the acting at the end was good and you did well to stop yourselfs from laughing it was perfectly good there was nothing wrong with it (but all the laughing)
Posted by: molly | December 01, 2008 at 07:02 PM
what happened to the funny video??? im UN-happy now sniff
Posted by: philippa | December 01, 2008 at 07:25 PM
hey that was good try not to laugh so much nice pronounsiation
and good acting skills !!
Posted by: livi | December 01, 2008 at 08:33 PM
Makes sense...
They kept going...
Couldnt stoplaughing...
Posted by: Allan | December 02, 2008 at 03:28 PM
Good use of language.
More Clear.
Good storyline.
Posted by: Jake | December 02, 2008 at 07:09 PM
Of cause it was really good because eden tegen and me are in itbut we do need to impoveon not laughing. The pronunciation was good at the begining and you could tell what tegen and eden were eatting.
Posted by: charlotte | December 02, 2008 at 07:42 PM
Uhhh...
At least you tried? XD
You had a pretty good script,
just awful pronunciation and a lot of giggles. :)
x
Posted by: Jessica | December 03, 2008 at 07:04 PM
that would have been a fab spanish video if you hadnt have laughed soo much
the story line was good pronunciation could be improved
but other than that really well done guys!
Posted by: lauren | December 07, 2008 at 09:08 PM